I need an Opinion

I made this card for this week's cacc, and i would like u to see it,m and if possible to vote on it LOOOL
So comment and rate!

http://www.kaibacorporation.com/viewtopic.php?id=25047&p=57

Nice, some grammar mistakes, and it'd be better if it was remove from play a DARK from his grave instead of the Extra Deck thing but it's great.
9/10 love the art bro.
I think you have a good chance, and how did YOU get a good pic xD?

:/
I always had bad pics and i took hours to find them...but yeah Sheodon showed me an awsome card galleries, Jazin Kay's or what's the name, thanks sheodon eheh.
And thanks neos for the comment

It has some grammatical errors, and to be honest, I thin that this card is just weak. You already need to pay LP and it only disables the DARK monsters, and it also mills from Extra Deck. Its Summoning Condition is also not easy to do.

To be honest, I think the last 2 weeks for Card Making had really awful themes. C'mon, LIGHT/DARK opposite is not creative, it's lame. And there are also enough cards for them, just check Ally of Justice cards.

Competitopn is competitions and i dont care with the theme i just want to try it =)
SS cyber dragon, normal summon junk warrior and get tuningware on the field, sycnrho and draw 1 card...only 2 cards needed to summon with luck...there is lots of support to it, also milling the extra deck, wich is little make it impossible for my opp to syncrho cards such as blackwings, inside the theme...
without paying it would be OP with such stats... it limits the opp if it is a dark deck and since its a Synchro card instead of making a deck around it its always a side option...